My original design concept was to create a poster of a women drinking out of a water bottle but instead of water coming out, oil and gunk would be coming out instead. When questioned about this design concept I found that the design concept was to complex and it needed to be simplified. I came up with some Other ideas including a bottle shape filled with type, a tap dripping with facts in the 'drip' and serveral other ideas. I still was not 100 % happy with my design. I came across a poster design for global warming in a magazine a fell in love with the design. I gained inspiration from this poster and wanted to create my own design using the shape of a bottle instead of the earth shape they used for their design. my early design for the poster was very similar and I thought it may breach copyright so I changed certain elements, colours and positioning.
The feedback given of my final design concept was;
- to have a deeper meaning on the concept and learn how to speak about my design confidently.
- Authors messahe Vs viewers message
- That the white droplet cannot be seen from a long distance
- It was noted that it was a good idea to bring up the issue of copyright with other people and finding the line of what is copying and what is getting inspiration.
- the design has 60% form and 40% function
- slightly missing the mark on message but a good piece overall
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