Modern Kraft Poster

In class we were given the task to come up with a poster for a Graphic Design Conference.

My idea was to have something very simple but eye catching ..... I seen a similar design to the one I used for 'modern kraft' and really thought that would work well in my poster. When looking at logos of computer brands and software I found red and blue and black were very dominant colours so I choose to use these colours in my work

Poster 1                                        Poster 2
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FEEDBACK:
(Poster 1) I had allot of positive feedback on my work mainly in regards to how i split up the text. In relation to the text and main heading "modern Kraft" i was given feedback to perhaps make the words "modern" stand out a bit more so they are more readable and easier to understand.
Another comment made was when first glancing at the poster its hard to know what its about, so i will look at ways the perhaps make 'Graphic Design Conference' stand out.
Also People were not sure about the conflicting angles of my wrk as it read vertical and then there are stripes running down the page .... so i will have a look a different shapes and try some different things or perhaps minimize this to see how it looks.
(Poster 2 ) My second poster was not as 'liked' as my first. comments made on my second poster was that it reminded people of russian constructivism work.
My second poster was a bit of a rush and i would like to play a bit more with colour and things but people tended to like the pencil and the red flow reminded them of a river .... which it was not meant to

POSTER REMAKE .......